Too much to ask (1978) pt.2 to "Run Away"

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Awww, so sad! And Michael's got a secret... hmm...

Very good! I'm loving it and can't wait to read more!

Are you kidding me? Ending like that you needa be slapped. But I need you to finish so no slapping....for now....

Peyton is a very charitable person and its sad that she had to reunite with her family over a death but I guess she did need it. What she didn't need was that call from Jackie. Dude is jacked up cuz he cant get none now that she is taken but I wish I knew what is wrong with Mikey...

PS I'm updating tonite!

BadAngelness: Finally! Yo ass ain't been on ALL WINTER BREAK. I NEED TO SLAP YOU! Lol Just kidding but I was gonna just finish the story off so that when you came back, you could just read it then. And I couldn't think of a better ending, sooooo....Yeah. But I would love to read your update. *smacks lips* wit yo LATE ass hahahahaha

MJJsGirl4Life: Thank You so much! I'm glad you like it and I'm about to update tonight as well. How about that story of yours now?

*smacks lips back* wit yo impacient ass girl i is a busy person sometimes. had to set up my new phone(i Phone 4S), play angry birds, be a temp mom,plan stuff, go to a gradutaion, live, visit people, and my computer was bein a lil dumb butt anyway! shoot be happy with the update you got and now its your turn and a CERTAIN someone to update

ahem ahem

MJJsGirl4Life

Girl, YOU KNOW WHAT? I was trying to update and I got stuck on.... a certain part of the story. A certain TYPE of a part of a story that has an....EROTIC nature. I'm not good at that and I'm still stuck so you might have to wait....SORRY in advance. Just a little bit longer. And yeah she needs to log on and post that young update.

P.S GIRL! DON'T NOBODY WANNA HEAR ABOUT YO LITTLE NON-EXISTENT SCHEDULE! lol

I can help if you need it and I'm for reall on that schedule. I was playing mommy like 92% and gettin into that angry birds plus my sis grad frm college

Well, updated. Did you see?

I knew I was missin somebody! Trick smdh... But I feel kinda bad for Peyton but she handled that in a kick ass way at least. I would've blacked out after goin CN on that trifling little skeeZer. I think I'd be hurt at the fact that he never told her! C'mon man then you gonna screw her too? I'm disgusted. But that was a good update right there. So you must really like calling that chick a blasian right? Lol

LOL in real life, I probably would've handled it the same way, Peyton's personality is based off of me anyway. But I would want to fight too, no doubt. I wouldn't be hurt because I don't need anybody that would be that way anyway. I just like to fight. but Peyton's different because I really WOULDN'T care, but she does.
I don't know Blasian's actual name and I don't want to make one up for her (because she's a real person) for some reason sooo.. yeah. lol
I made myself mad writing that part of the story though.

Lol but writing is emotional, they get mad you get mad. They cry you cry. They laugh and so do we. Figments of our imagination based on reality and our reality becomes our creation as well. Sometimes my characters are me but mainly it'll be just some traits and the rest will be strictly fiction. Like Valerie was nerdy but cool in high school (just like me) I imagined her As lookin mixed cause I kinda do and she can be clumsy and extra flirty. Ask any guy who knows me this is definitely me. But I don't know about the party or gettin jealous in a dressing room or insisting on paying cuz Im spoiled. but both of y'all go hard

THAT... is SO DEEP. I didn't know you had that kind of depth, but yeah because when I write a story that is particularly sad, I'll cry my eyes out, I mean tears all ON the paper. LOL Peyton is NOT me obviously but like you said with Valerie, she's based off of me, how I feel, what I like, what I don't like, what I do, what I don't do and how I handle certain situations. I would NEVER pay on a date. That's the guy's job. And thank you, I always liked to think that about myself.

Your welcome and I hardly knew I had that depth either! Lol but I do have It at times I guess. It's amazing how close we are with Peyton and Valerie even if we have several differences. But I love connecting with them sometimes. Sometimes I feel all of the pain as if it was me then I'd hafta take a break. I might update on Tuesday FYI

Hahaha yeah. That always happens to me(feeling the character's pain) regardless of whether it's my character or not. I COMPLETELY understand though.
Oh okay. Can't wait for the new read. I'm going to post the 3rd and final part of the story later on tonight, or tomorrow. I don't go back to school until Tuesday.

I haven't really been on a lot, :/

final part is where exactly? lol

I haven't had time since school started to finish it. I'm trying to think of what exactly I want to happen. Well... I know but I'm just trying to figure out how I want to word it. :/

two words
word document lol

Hahahaha NO. lol

hope you're able to update soon but i understand if you cant