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mjstruelove
Posts : 74 Points : 792488 Reputation : 14 Join date : 2009-12-10 Age : 36 Location : Michaelland, Alabama
| Subject: Liberian Girl February 25th 2010, 7:39 pm | |
| First, of all cut me some slack, its my first. Secondly, thanks to Jalisa for providing me with this one of her many half-way done stories. Lastly, i hope you enjoy.
“If only you knew, how much I do,” I sang along with the music as I was getting my lettuce out the fridge. “Do love you,” the song went on as he came into the kitchen and hugged me from behind. “How was it” I asked turning my head so he could kiss me on the cheek. “Starts out good” he said trailing kisses down my neck “and gets better when I see you.” I put down my knife and turned around to face him. “Well that’s good” I said as I threw my arms around his neck. He looked down upon me with his hungry eyes, the eyes full of love, affection, and desire.
He kissed me softly with his rose-petal soft lips as I drew his body closer to me, and kissed him more forcefully. I grinned as I felt him harden while he pushed my lettuce, my bowl, and everything on the floor. Baby, that’s the fourth bowl, I panted into his ear, as he licked and trailed kisses down my neck. “Don’t worry about it,” he mumbled as he picked me up and placed me on the island countertop, “I’ll buy another one, he said as I raised my arms up as he pulled my shirt over my head. I threw my head back from excitement as he nibbled on my collarbone, gosh; I was waiting for this all day. “Oh Michael,” I sighed as he put his hands on my legs and separated my thighs. “Baby, my pants” “Yea” he moaned as I leaned back on the counter as he undid my belt buckle. He climbed on the island and hovered above me. “my pants” I thought “well forget it” I was burning with desire. I wanted to feel him close to me. I pulled him down and kissed him feverishly. His skin was so hot I could just feel the passion pulsing through him. “Michael baby,” I said between kisses “we have to take off our pants.” But there was nothing but heat. I wanted him and he wanted me. But he was too caught up in the heat. “Ring, ring, ring” the phone sounded. I pushed him up “Michael the phone”. “It might not be important” he said as he leaned back over me. “Yea” I said as I ran my fingers over his chest as the phone stopped. He began thumbing my nipples through my bra. “Oh Michael, I moaned. Being so close to him without him in me was a disease and it was killing the hell out of me. “Ring, ring, ring” “Shit” Michael spat as the phone began to ring again. “I know” I huffed. “Hmm hm” he pouted as he helped me down off the counter. I pecked him on the cheek then ran into the family room to answer the phone.
“Hello” “Hi, Shun, I was just calling to check on you and Michael, haven’t heard from you guys in a minute.” “Oh, well, we’re good” I said. “Actually we’re umm a bit busy right now” I said smiling to myself. “Nasty selves,” she said laughing “Well you guys call me tomorrow, alright”. “Yea, bye Janet” “Bye”. I silently placed the phone back on the hook, and pulled off my pants, and was about to tiptoe back into the kitchen when he came up behind me put his hands on my shoulders then unclamped my bra, and pulled it off. Slowly he turned me around to face him. “I see you’ve undressed, well almost.” I said as I looked him up and down running my hand down his body. I ran my hand down to the edge of his boxers, just to mess with him, and grabbed his dick through the fabric. “’Somebody’s ready for some fun,”
I lightly laughed. He leaned me back over the sofa and rubbed his hand back and forth across my damp panties before pulling them and his briefs off. I pushed him over and made him sit as I straddled his lap. I could feel his dick standing hard and erect poking for my ass. He placed his hands on my waist and lifted me so he could enter. Instantly I threw my head back in bliss. “Girl”, he moaned as he drove himself farther into me. Whoa, something had happened between now and the last time we where together, because I was tight (real tight) and I really wasn’t expecting that. “Michael, I can’t do it I,” stammered already feeling weak (meaning on top taking control). He slowly pulled out. “What,” he said taunting me. “Mrs. Bad, can’t handle this?” he asked lying me down on the couch. “Don’t tease, Michael.” He replied with a light laugh and hung his sexy head to the side. “Why you always teasing?” I asked on the verge of sexually killing him. “Don’t worry, I got this” he sighed in my ear as he slipped his hand between us to see how moist I was. I bit my lip from sexual hunger. “Michael,” I panted “god, you’re such a fucking tease,” I sighed as I grinded my body against his hand. He teasingly pulled his hand away. “You know you like it” he whispered as he separated my legs. I blushed. He was right. His teasing ways drove me crazy. “Let it down” I cooed implying about his hair. He sat up and slowly pulled the band off his hair. I sighed as he shook his head loosening the curls.
“Alright” I said patting my thighs ready to get this started. “Hold up” he said as he jumped up and walked over to the table and put on a record. I bit my lips watching his lil tootie bootie sway as he walked away. Must I say it made a nice backdrop for his ohwee. I put my hands under my head as I heard the first note of Ready For The Worlds’ Love You Down. I should have known. I closed my eyes as the song started and waited for the low sigh from the record. I loved this song and oh did Michael know it. “Baby…you ready” he asked as he climbed on the couch hovering above me. I started to reply but his lips smothered mines as he raped my lips with his and crawled between my parted thighs. “Oooh,” I lightly groaned. He grabbed my chin with his right hand and lightly kissed me on the lips before venturing down farther south. I arched my back in pleasure as he licked a line down my stomach. “Baby,” he droned. “Yes, Michael Yes. I stutter. “Girl,” he growled showering my breast with his sweet tender kisses. “I love you,” he said sitting up to look me in the face. “Michael I know,” I stated. “I know,” he said smiling and kissing my belly button then began to circle it with his tongue. His fingers begin to lightly tap the beat of the song into my sides. He kissed his way across my stomach and down to the spot that ached for his love the most. “Oooh yes”, I cried out as he prodded the opening of my walls with his fingers igniting my body. “I’m ready,” I uttered. “Oh, I know,” he blew at me as he gently lifted my legs to enter me for the second time. “Boy,” I gasped in shock as he quickly slid his entire member into me. Michael was indeed well endowed. The look on his face when he entered into my hot, moist, pleasure abiding walls was sheer ecstasy. “Mmmm girl,” he moaned as he pumped himself harder and deeper inside me. Sweats beads began dripping from his hair and off his body as the pleasure between us intensified while time ticked on. I cried out in ecstasy as my senses flooded my body causing me to break out in a hot sweat. Michael had set my body ablaze and we were burning together. He placed his two fingers across the front tip of my pussy and began to vibrate them fiercely causing me to thrash against the sofa. “Michael,” I called as I felt my body began to tremble. He hitched up my legs around his waist and slammed into me, as if demanding I call out his name. I hooked my legs around his midsection and held on with all the strength I could muster. “Michael,” I murmured. “Yes baby”, he panted nearly out of breath moving his fingers fasted. “Ooooa Michael,” I gasped fighting to hold off my spasms. He smiled down at me seeing the struggle written all over my face. “Let it go,” he stammered as we both climaxed together.”Yess” I screamed as he let out the sexiest moan I’ve ever heard. Sweetly my body throbbed around his pulsating joint as he filled me with his creamy juices. “Oh, god,” he sighed as he collapsed on top of me. “Baby,” he whispered lowly tracing lines on my stomach. “Hmm,” I moaned “I love you” “Naku Penda Piya” I whispered back. “Mpenziwe” we both replied in unison. | |
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BadAngelness
Posts : 1468 Points : 815952 Reputation : 38 Join date : 2009-12-20 Age : 28 Location : Behind the Mask of the Undead
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl February 25th 2010, 10:18 pm | |
| .............*speechless*................ | |
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jalisa
Posts : 355 Points : 803554 Reputation : 29 Join date : 2009-10-29 Age : 33 Location : in the Cabin playin Strip poker w/ Michael
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl February 25th 2010, 10:20 pm | |
| me like the way you finished this
NICE NICE | |
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lostinparadise
Posts : 432 Points : 808323 Reputation : 31 Join date : 2009-11-01 Age : 30 Location : Gagged and shackled to Michael's bed awaiting my punishment.
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl February 26th 2010, 3:39 pm | |
| AWWWW *cries tears of joy* that was so cute and so hot at the same time, just like Michael , and I absolutely LOVE how you quoted my most favorite part of Liberian Girl at the end. I keep going back to that part and reading it again and again. It was beautiful mjstruelove and u should defintely write more. | |
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MJKage
Posts : 68 Points : 805776 Reputation : 8 Join date : 2009-09-11 Age : 33 Location : fantasy land in my head
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl February 26th 2010, 6:31 pm | |
| That was beautiful. nuff said | |
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BadAngelness
Posts : 1468 Points : 815952 Reputation : 38 Join date : 2009-12-20 Age : 28 Location : Behind the Mask of the Undead
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl February 26th 2010, 6:41 pm | |
| - MJKage wrote:
- That was beautiful. nuff said
totally agreed x10 | |
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mjstruelove
Posts : 74 Points : 792488 Reputation : 14 Join date : 2009-12-10 Age : 36 Location : Michaelland, Alabama
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl February 26th 2010, 10:58 pm | |
| *run on stage and bow runs back grabs jalisa then we both go on and bow together*
OMG thanks alot you guys really | |
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BadAngelness
Posts : 1468 Points : 815952 Reputation : 38 Join date : 2009-12-20 Age : 28 Location : Behind the Mask of the Undead
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl February 26th 2010, 11:08 pm | |
| - mjstruelove wrote:
- *run on stage and bow runs back grabs
jalisa then we both go on and bow together*
OMG thanks alot you guys really dont thank usits just da truth!!! | |
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mjstruelove
Posts : 74 Points : 792488 Reputation : 14 Join date : 2009-12-10 Age : 36 Location : Michaelland, Alabama
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl February 26th 2010, 11:16 pm | |
| - lostinparadise wrote:
- AWWWW *cries tears of joy* that was so cute and so hot at the same time, just like Michael, and I absolutely LOVE how you quoted my most favorite part of Liberian Girl at the end. I keep going back to that part and reading it again and again.
It was beautiful mjstruelove and u should defintely write more. Definitely write more..... about that . umm.. . yea... but enjoys the feedback | |
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lostinparadise
Posts : 432 Points : 808323 Reputation : 31 Join date : 2009-11-01 Age : 30 Location : Gagged and shackled to Michael's bed awaiting my punishment.
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl February 26th 2010, 11:17 pm | |
| - angelpup wrote:
- mjstruelove wrote:
- *run on stage and bow runs back grabs
jalisa then we both go on and bow together*
OMG thanks alot you guys really dont thank us its just da truth!!! plus, we LOVE complimenting good writers and this was good writing;) p.s. What's wrong? Do u think u can't write another fic? Cuz I'm sure every/anybody here would be happy to help u in any way. | |
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mjstruelove
Posts : 74 Points : 792488 Reputation : 14 Join date : 2009-12-10 Age : 36 Location : Michaelland, Alabama
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl February 26th 2010, 11:27 pm | |
| naw its just idk i mean it wasn't dat hard jalisa practically wrote it but wat eva
i guess i can write another 1 (just not in the near future) *3 tests coming up* | |
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lostinparadise
Posts : 432 Points : 808323 Reputation : 31 Join date : 2009-11-01 Age : 30 Location : Gagged and shackled to Michael's bed awaiting my punishment.
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl February 26th 2010, 11:31 pm | |
| understandable, school's totally killing me too. | |
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BadAngelness
Posts : 1468 Points : 815952 Reputation : 38 Join date : 2009-12-20 Age : 28 Location : Behind the Mask of the Undead
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl February 27th 2010, 5:47 pm | |
| it kills us all!! | |
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Wonderlust
Posts : 170 Points : 802112 Reputation : 30 Join date : 2009-10-14 Age : 36 Location : Camped out between Mikey's voluptuously luscious thighs....and you know who made the tent!!! xDD
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl March 1st 2010, 1:34 pm | |
| OMFG. It was like slowly burning embers on a cloudy evening... So sweet yet sweltering with passion... Please excuse me as a breath into my paper bag... *weaze-a-weAZE* o.O | |
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jalisa
Posts : 355 Points : 803554 Reputation : 29 Join date : 2009-10-29 Age : 33 Location : in the Cabin playin Strip poker w/ Michael
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl March 1st 2010, 5:29 pm | |
| such enthusiasm | |
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Wonderlust
Posts : 170 Points : 802112 Reputation : 30 Join date : 2009-10-14 Age : 36 Location : Camped out between Mikey's voluptuously luscious thighs....and you know who made the tent!!! xDD
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl March 4th 2010, 4:44 pm | |
| LOL This was one of your "half-way done stories" jalisa?? You should seriously consider completing your fics! And mjstruelove, your killin' me with your SIG. Can't stop staring... *____* | |
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BadAngelness
Posts : 1468 Points : 815952 Reputation : 38 Join date : 2009-12-20 Age : 28 Location : Behind the Mask of the Undead
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl March 4th 2010, 4:56 pm | |
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jalisa
Posts : 355 Points : 803554 Reputation : 29 Join date : 2009-10-29 Age : 33 Location : in the Cabin playin Strip poker w/ Michael
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl March 4th 2010, 8:24 pm | |
| - Wonderlust wrote:
- LOL This was one of your "half-way done stories" jalisa?? You should seriously consider completing your fics!
And mjstruelove, your killin' me with your SIG. Can't stop staring... *____* i agree to the sig part its hypnotizing me | |
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BadAngelness
Posts : 1468 Points : 815952 Reputation : 38 Join date : 2009-12-20 Age : 28 Location : Behind the Mask of the Undead
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl March 5th 2010, 5:28 pm | |
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Cat^^
Posts : 329 Points : 783306 Reputation : 9 Join date : 2010-03-23 Age : 28 Location : Melting in the chocolate pools of my baby's eyes. :D
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl September 11th 2010, 7:05 am | |
| "I bit my lips watching his lil tootie bootie sway as he walked away."O_________________O LOLOL That was so cute xD Loved it so much! MOREEE | |
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MJsLilPYT
Posts : 227 Points : 744624 Reputation : -1 Join date : 2010-11-09 Age : 26 Location : Michael's bed.
| Subject: Re: Liberian Girl February 13th 2011, 4:41 am | |
| WOW. Just, WOW.
For your first fanfic...This was AMAZING! Definitley better than my first fanfic. | |
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